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Friday 28 September 2018

tisa The Real Story of The Princess and the Pea

The Real Story of The Princess and the Pea
WALT: retell a fairy tale with a significant twist




Character twist
raven, tricera ops,ravage .
Setting Twist
The mansion next to lonely lodge
Problem Twist



Orientation
(Beginning)
Problem
(Middle)
Resolution
(End)




Start Writing here:

Once upon a time there lived a guy named Raven. One day Raven was sad because he didn't have a girlfriend so the Raven was walking around the city and then there was a girl name Tricera-ops. When Tricera-ops saw Raven she followed him. She saw Raven go inside his mansion she was hiding from him.when she finished  hiding in the bush she knocked on the door Raven opened the door. When Raven saw Tricera-ops he slapped her face and she fell down the stairs.

One week later when raven went for a run he saw a girl that was just right for him.  He walked up to her and then asked her if she wanted to go to his mansion. The girl said yes and they walked to the mansion together. While they were walking to the mansion they began to talk and Raven found out the girls name was ravage . They both like cookies and cream ice-cream and have a lot in common. Raven wonders if this girl could be the princess he has been waiting for. Raven asked if she is a princess and she said no.

But Raven still liked her rather  ravage not tricera ops so Raven Mom was thinking about letting  Ravage sleep at his house.then Raven’s Mom told Raven and Ravage to go sleep she put a pea under the  i’n the morning Ravage told raven that she didn't sleep well and then Raven was so happy.

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